This update is about one month old. I finished revising the cowboy bedtime story but added too many words, I think. I made it more Texas themed as requested and even added aliens. : ) 

I'll trade about anything, even my second born child, for a pair of eyes to check out what I've done. By the way, you might have to wait a while for my second born child. There are no plans in the future for such a being to exist. 

 

Okay, my mom is getting on my case about not getting my revision done that I need to send back to Whitman. I told her I'd do it today or at least get started on it. I can usually revise pretty easily. But I'm having a very hard time how to make my cowboyish story have more of a Texas feel and on to make it read more like a folk tale. Someone refresh me on what makes a story more fairy-tale like. I'm not a dunce, but this is difficult. Might revise it four different ways to see what reads best.

Talk to you later,
Brian